Friday 21 June 2013

LUNCH







The fat hen moved
 deposits an egg.
    It's my lunch.





She feeds the starving
from her fertile womb
     Mother Earth.






Opened lunch box of her heart
            aroma wafted
      Satiated my hungry soul.








                                            FOR : HAIKU HEIGHT # 258 LUNCH

21 comments:

  1. Wow! Beautiful and unique takes on the prompt. The last one is so super

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  2. Take a bow.....Great take on the prompt. Feel satiated after reading your Haiku.

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    1. OH Panchali!! I am honoured by your appreciation. Thank you.

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  3. Adore the Mother Earth one. Beautiful!

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    1. Mother Earth is very beautiful. Thank you Maggie.

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  4. If only we could feed all of the hungry of the world! Lunch

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    1. Wish we could feed all the hungry in this world.Some parts of the world have abundance while some other parts are famished. Thank you WabiSabi.

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  5. Wow Kalpana. Second one is beautiful!!!

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    1. Thank you Juzta mum. Your appreciation is my pleasure.

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  6. They are all good - like teh first one best.

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  7. Why do you have verification AND moderation?

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  8. Wonderful Haiku. I loved the first one. The fat hen getting ready to lay an egg for your lunch!! Kya sundar idea hai.

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    1. Thank you for reading Usha Menon.The poultry industry is a boon to us.

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  9. Oh, these are all so apt! I don't think I can pick a favorite.. :-)

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    1. Thank you foam for reading. At times it is difficult to pick and choose a favourite.

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  10. Interesting take on the prompt!! You made a nice set:)

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  11. Very uniquely different!!

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