Saturday 14 September 2013

River

Indus flows
civilization settles
along the banks.

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Dip in polluted Ganges
washes away sins
But drinks Bisleri water.

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Source in  mountains
Flows in the plains
ends journey to meet sea.

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6 comments:

  1. Rajlakshmi14 September 2013 at 04:50

    very meaningful haikus... well written

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  2. Gaurang Rao14 September 2013 at 06:07

    I loved them all ... It makes so much sense. Beautiful

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  3. Nanka14 September 2013 at 08:42

    The first two outstanding!! Powerful and deep the polluted ganges one!!

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  4. Unknown15 September 2013 at 02:41

    Awesome Haiku.I liked the second one. It has an undercurrent of 'ridicule'.

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  5. Unknown15 September 2013 at 03:29

    Nice ones. The second one is interesting. Bagal men churi muh men ram ram.

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  6. Gayu16 September 2013 at 06:19

    Agree with Usha, second one is very true :)

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