Sunday 1 December 2013

Rainbow

Haiku Heights #311 - Rainbow




                                     



spectrum of seven colours
in the sky momentary
rainbow ,  in my heart , immortal.




violet , indigo , blue , green
yellow orange , red
can you add colour to my life?









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19 comments:

  1. Unknown1 December 2013 at 04:54

    Kalpana this is unique.The first one is exemplary.

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  2. Anonymous1 December 2013 at 22:29

    Very nice! I like the idea of adding colour to life.

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  3. vivinfrance1 December 2013 at 23:58

    lovely descriptive haiku

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  4. Unknown2 December 2013 at 06:51

    Lovely haiku! The second one reminded me of a song my daughter learned in kindergarten. It goes "Red and yellow and pink and green
    Purple and orange and blue
    I can sing a rainbow,
    sing a rainbow,
    sing a rainbow too." When she was little every picture she colored a rainbow because she loved all the colors and felt it would be prettier if every single color was represented. ♥

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    1. kalpana solsi2 December 2013 at 07:06

      Kathy it's really nice of you to share an anecdote of your baby's K.G. class.A rainbow looks vibrant and pretty due to its colours and tell her to use all the colour and paint a rainbow which would be only her's , an unique one.

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  5. Panchali2 December 2013 at 06:53

    Love them all, Kalpana. But, the last one is just too good..:)

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  6. Reading Pleasure2 December 2013 at 07:22

    Lovely haiku, Kalpana. I especially love the first one!

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  7. Sumana Roy2 December 2013 at 09:32

    last lines of both are unique Kalpana.............

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    1. kalpana solsi2 December 2013 at 10:07

      I am pleased to know that you liked my lines, Sumana.

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  8. Anonymous2 December 2013 at 11:03

    I liked both of these poems. Good work.

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  9. Locomente2 December 2013 at 23:18

    Ah...
    Adding colors to life by someone would be lovely...

    Please visit me...
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/12/colorful-life.html

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  10. Reshma3 December 2013 at 16:52

    Coloring someone's life and immortal rainbow are both such lovely thoughts Kalpana.

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  11. Sri Valli4 December 2013 at 00:17

    So awesomely described!! Beautiful both of them!!

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  12. Eliz Frank7 December 2013 at 08:18

    Your last line is brilliant. Very nicely done haiku!
    Eliz

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