Wednesday 31 July 2013

LOVE AND MYSTERY- FICTION 55

I have made an attempt at writing both the themes.Hope the readers find them interesting.


LOVE 


A red rose adorned his dark blue suit. His face was a picture of serenity,
when she had a last look at her husband's face. The coffin was lowered
into the grave. She suppressed a tiny sob. All the mourners reached home.
Her sister helped her change into a black dress from her bridal gown.



MYSTERY

His estranged wife came to collect his body. He fell from the cliff
 when clicking the first rays of the sun. The forensic report was on the
 table when the policeman looked at her suspiciously. A deal was
 struck to divide the property into two. Her hair strands were
entangled on her husband's dead fingers.


FOR : WRITE TRIBE FICTION 55

34 comments:

  1. Love: pain is the least required emotion close to love...this made me cringe a bit
    Mystery: Very interesting...money is the root of all evil!

    Good ones, Kalpana...I need to start racking my mind too :)

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    1. At times love and pain go together. and money is mysterious and the root cause of all evil and at the same time keeps many relationships intact.

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  2. Sad and intriguing. Well done!

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    1. Right Debbie one post is sad as the bride is a widow on her wedding day and the second intrigues with her wicked behaviour.

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  3. Oh my...wasn't she wicked? Nice, Kalpana.

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    1. She is wicked and I had to shock my readers.

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  4. OMG!! She did it!! How devilish! Good one!

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    1. Yes Shilpa, I had to make her devilish. Often women are at the receiving end . but this time there is a turn of 180 degrees.Shocking isn't it?

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  5. You have described it beautifully Kalpana!
    Loved it! :)

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  6. Beauty ..you have two faces!!! Lovely post

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  7. Wow! Your love story was so fresh!! Wonderful writing!

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    1. Thanks for the appreciation fuschiaoutbursts.

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  8. I love the depth in your writings...I get inspired by them...

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  9. WOW, both of these are amazing!!! Loved them. Not quite sure which I liked best. Both!!

    Kathy
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com

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    1. Kathy it is difficult to choose one as both are of extreme emotions : love and betrayal.

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  10. Nice take on the prompt! It's difficult to conclude a story in just 55 words. I've tried this for the first time!:)

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    1. It is difficult to conclude a story n just 55 words but the beauty lies in making a try and achieving it.

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  11. Very well done, Kalpana! I like your morbid take on the prompt! Works perfectly. Thank you!

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  12. Wow. Thank you Kalpana. I love your morbid take on the prompt. Very well done!

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  13. Quite some mystery. Loved the dark theme for 55 fiction.. :)

    - Vaisakh

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    1. Thanks for appreciation, the museumpiece. WANTED TO TRY SOMETHING DIFFERENT.

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  14. Oh My.. My heart skipped from one emotion to the other..U surprise me, as always Kalpana :D

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    1. And this time it is a dark surprise, Dear Dee.

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  15. Awesome.....Kalpana you are a pool house of talent yaar....:)
    Very well crafted :)

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  16. Kalpana, this was very well written. Awesome!
    Ishithaa

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  17. Kalpana this was really beautiful...loved both of it ... :)

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  18. Both the stories were out of the world good really. My favourite one was mystery, it had such a great impact to read hair were entangled in his fingers!

    Richa

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  19. Beautifully painful at the loss of a loved one.
    Cheerz
    Vishal

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  20. Beautifully painful at the loss of a loved one.
    Cheerz
    Vishal
    (www.vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com)

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