Sunday 20 October 2013

Grey :Haiku.

my school uniform
    grey in colour
grey cells acquired.

grey cells acquired
from life's school
experiences for life.

experiences of life                                
bitter and sweet
   grey crown.





                                                      For : Haiku Heights

                                                        For : Poets United

20 comments:

  1. I enjoyed the narrative quality of this haiku cascade. I like the way you used alternate meanings for "grey" prompt. Good thoughtful work.

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    http://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2013/10/20/only-a-grey-smudge/

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  2. the grey crown symbol of the bitter and sweet...very nice...and an interesting progression through the greys....

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  3. like the different shades of grey...beautiful cascade...... :)

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  4. Nice one...well written.

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  5. I like the way each haiku links to the next.

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  6. Our gray crowns are our badges of honor. I love the cascading lines......

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  7. This gives a whole other meaning to grey. Thoughtful and beautiful. Like Kerry, I love the linking.

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  8. a great cascade of haiku... well done

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  9. Wonderful shades of grey depicted marvelously.

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  10. Loved you Haiku. Specially third one. :) My haiku on 'grey' was inspired from your post 'I knew it was my last day there' :) I think I should say thank you to you then, Thank you. :) :)

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  11. Lovely. All three of them. :)

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  12. Nice, loved the way you have done this one! :)

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  13. Thank you for visiting my blog and commenting.
    My thought as I read your Haiku trilogy, since you started with youth and developed to maturity, was that eventually the grey crown gets whiter and whiter as we go toward wisdom.

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  14. Thats a lovely set...

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    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/10/rainbows-adorned.html

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  15. How true! You have nailed it! :)

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  16. Lovely Cascade Kalpana, from grey matter inside to grey crown that is one "grey"t journey...

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